小学生英语作文入门篇范文,小学生英语作文范文及评语

【#小学英语# 导语】英语作文是英语学习的重要内容之一，也是学生综合能力的体现。它与学生的词汇量、语法、句法能力和逻辑思维能力等有密不可分的关系，在高考中占有相当大的比重。而许多学生在此方面丢分甚多，以致影响最后总分，因此提高学生写作能力势在必行。以下是©文档大全网整理的《小学生英语作文范文及评语》相关资料，希望帮助到您。

【篇一】小学生英语作文范文及评语

　　Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. 
　　How about you? What’s your favourite food?
　　评语：

　　My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

【篇二】小学生英语作文范文及评语

　　Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
　　Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
　　评语：这一篇写爱好的文章，小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习，他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好，而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手，对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画。从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

【篇三】小学生英语作文范文及评语

　　Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
　　评语：
　　写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。
　　时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。
　　句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。
　　注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写

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