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以“A person I will never forget”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1.短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等;
2.短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
3.词数80左右。
A person I will never forget
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A person I will never forget
My uncle Liu is the person that I will never forget, He is a common soldier from the Chinese People's Liberation Army and looks very handsome,especially wearing his PLA uniform. In addition, he is a very generous person and has no hesitation to give his help to anyone who is in troubles. During his free time he likes jogging or playing basketball.
The most unforgettable thing is that one day in winter I had a walk with him on a bridge, when we saw a drowning boy shouting for help in the river, At this moment uncle Liu jumped from the bridge into the river and succeeded in rescuing that boy immediately though it was a very cold day.
In my mind, Uncle Liu is a hero.
权威解读
这篇文章内容包含所有要点,信息完整,衔接紧密,条理清晰。该文有两大亮点,一是词汇量大,如使用了especially,generous,hesitation,unforgettable,drowning,immediately等高级词汇;二是句式丰富,如使用了when wearing his PLA uniform省略形式,who is in troubles...定语从句,that one day in winter...表语从句等。这些亮点使得该文从众多文章中脱颖而出,让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
好词佳句
1.handsome 英俊的
2.no hesitation 毫不犹豫
3.jump from 从……跳下去
4.succeed in rescuing 成功地营救
5.In addition, he is a very generous person and has no hesitation to give his help to anyone who is in troubles. 再者,他是一个非常大方的人,他会毫不犹豫地给有困难的人提供帮助。
点拨:这是一个较复杂的句型,既有带to的不定式结构,又有who引导的定语从句,显示出小作者较高的驾驭英语的能力。
参考样文
A person I will never forget
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher. He's a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He's kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know.He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.
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