【#雅思# 导语】通往成功的路是奋斗,一路上我们应不停止一日努力,不放弃一切机会,不报一丝侥幸心理,踏实学习,坚持积累,雅思写作水平提高的好方法介绍,你要认真对待哦。
一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
原文:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
改写:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The
landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
1) 原文:The team members are good players.
改写:The team members play well.
2) 原文:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
改写:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:
1) 原文:There is no opportunity for promotion.
改写:No opportunity for promotion exists.
2) 原文:Here are the books you ordered.
改写:The books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了
例如:
1、原文:My supervisor went past my desk.
改写:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、原文:She is a careful shopper.
改写:She compares prices and quality.
三、尽量运用主动语态
例如:
1、原文:The organization has been supported by charity.
改写:Charity has supported the organization.
2、原文:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
改写:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语
例如:
1、原文:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your
recommendations.
改写:We have received your letter and intended to follow your
recommendation.
2、原文:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry
laboratory caught fire.
改写:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught
fire.
五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语
例如:
1、原文:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
改写:They will not agree to any of his proposals.
2、原文:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures
next fall.
改写:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next
fall.
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