一、因特网利与弊 【例题展示】 飞速发展的网络时代深刻影响着人民的生活与思维，对新鲜事物总是保持亢奋状态的青少年便成了网络时代的排头兵，网络对青少年学生的优势有目共睹，但由于他们生理、心理的不成熟性和非稳定性，使得网络对他们的影响极大，且负面影响显得尤为突出。如何应对网络对他们的负面影响，并使之降到最低程度，要求政府、社会、家庭和青少年个人要达成共识。阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Internet has been perhaps the most outstanding innovation in the field of communication in the history of mankind. The internet has become the most ever powerful tool for man throughout the world. The internet is a collection of various services and resources. Today internet has brought a globe in a single room. Right from news across the corner of the world, wealth of knowledge to shopping, purchasing the tickets of your favorite movie-everything is at your finger tips. The Internet has great potential and lot to offer. However, like every single innovation in science and technology, internet has its own advantages and disadvantages. An official study two years ago claimed that almost 10 percent of the nation’s young people were “addicted to the web”. Overuse of the Internet has become a household worry in China. The country has more than 300 million Internet users, 40 millions of whom play online games. In a bid to prevent Internet addiction of their children, Chinese parents are turning towards electro-shock therapy at a clinic that claims they will be “reborn” free of the obsession. The shocks are mild and harmless, intended to help teenagers to calm down slowly as they free themselves from their obsessions. Children need love, care and attention from parents, friends and teachers. Society should educate and lead these children instead of treating them as psycho-paths to be dosed with drugs and electric shocks. [写作内容] 1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容； 2．然后以约120个词就因特网的利与弊谈谈你的看法，内容包括： (1) 因特网对人们生活的影响； (2) 人们对因特网的态度； (3) 你认为应如何保持青少年健康上网。 [写作要求] 1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 【思路点拨】 1. 概括短文的要点：因特网的作用（playing a more and more important role）以及因特网的利与弊（has advantages and disadvantages）。 2. 因特网对人们生活的影响：影响生活的方方面面（affects all kinds of aspects in life）因特网有利也有弊（affects the young generation’s healthy growth greatly）。 3. 人们对因特网的态度：一些人支持（some are for the Internet）；一些人反对（others are against for the disadvantages)。 4. 如何保持青少年健康上网：采取措施确保（take measures to ensure）；正确合理使用因特网（use the Internet correctly and reasonably）。 在写作表达上尽量避免多次使用同一个句型，适当地采用多种句型，增加一些连接词汇使自己的文章看起来表达得体，语言流利。 【范文赏析】 With the development of science and technology, the Internet is playing a more and more important role and affects all kinds of aspects in life. It has advantages and disadvantages and affects the young generation’s healthy growth greatly. On one hand, some are for the Internet for its advantages such as various services and resources. All of these greatly enrich the people’s colorful life. On the other hand, others are against for the disadvantages because some children are addicted to the web. The disadvantages of the Internet have greatly affected the young generation’s healthy growth especially those who’ve fallen into the Internet addiction such as the Internet games and chatting. They’ve been forced to accept treatment in hospital. So the whole society especially the parents and teachers should take measures to ensure the children use the Internet correctly and reasonably. In a word, the advantages of the Internet outweigh its disadvantages if we make best use of it. 【经典表达】 一、在因特网的时候常用的短语有： 1. With the development of science and technology (随着科技的发展) 2. play an important role（起重要作用） 3. such as (例如) 4. be forced to（被迫做某事） 5. are addicted to the web（沉迷于网络） 6. use the Internet correctly and reasonably (正确和合理使用因特网) 二、在描写健康的时候常用的句型有： 1. On one hand…On the other hand（一方面……另一方面） 2. some are for …others are against（一些人支持……另外一些人反对） 3. have greatly affected the young generation’s healthy growth (已经极大地影响了青少年的健康成长) 4. if we make best use of…（如果我们充分利用……） 【举一反三】 1. 随着科技的发展，人们已经离不开因特网了。 ______________________________ 2. 计算机在生活中起着越来越重要的作用。 ______________________________ 3. 事情都有两方面，因特网也有两方面例如利与弊。 ______________________________ 4. 一些网瘾少年被迫送往治疗中心。 ______________________________ 5. 孩子们应该被教会如何正确和合理使用因特网。 ______________________________ 6. 那些沉迷于网络的人往往是年轻人。 ______________________________ 7. 一方面因特网能帮助学生学习，另一方面因特网也能影响学生的学习。 ______________________________ 8. 一些人支持学生上网，另外一些人反对学生上网。 ______________________________ 9. 因特网上一些不健康的东西已经极大地影响了青少年的健康成长。 ______________________________ 10. 如果我们充分利用因特网，我们会从中获益的。 ______________________________ [举一反三] 1. With the development of science and technology, people can’t live without the Internet. 2. The computer plays a more and more role in life. 3. Everything has two sides, so the Internet also ha two sides such as advantages and disadvantages. 4. Some addicted children are forced to send to the treatment center. 5. Children should be taught to learn how to use the Internet correctly and reasonably. 6. Those who are addicted to the web are usually the young. 7. On one hand, the Internet can improve the students’ score, on the other hand, it can affect the students’ score. 8. Some are for the students’ surfing the Internet, while others are against it. 9. Something in the Internet has greatly affected the young generation’s healthy growth. 10. If we make best use of the Internet, we can get benefit from it. 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/1702311564ce0508763231126edb6f1afe00714c.html