一篇成功申请哈佛大学Essay范文 Sameer在美国的底特律长大，高中时他的随着家人移居____。Sameer有色盲和音盲这两个问题，他在他的申请短文时解释为什么对于他来说，他在烹饪的创造表现才能是有限的。他在文中很清楚地表达了他在追求烹饪到达完美而获得的快乐，而且在人生中他也会有同样的态度。 很多学生家长都问我，有没有申请短文的模板。我告诉他们，假如你想得到一篇好的文章，就一定要学生写出自己的Admission Essay。写好后，可以由高手一起共同研究，琢磨如何修改。但一定不要全部让别人代劳。看看这位同学是如何写的吧。 I really like food. On some drab school days I cheer myself up thinking of the dinner awaiting me in the evening. Often I do a 24-hour fast to ready my stomach for a huge meal. Now， being served this food is fine. It-apos-aposs usually restful and rewarding to sit down after a long day to someone else-apos-aposs careful work， whether they be parents， grandmothers， or Little Caesar. But I-apos-aposve 第 1 页 共 3 页 noticed a dull glaze in the eyes of those who cook every night. They-apos-aposre doing it not to forge the uncreated conscience of their race， as a hungry James Joyce might say， but out of sometimes love and sometimes duty. I know cooks whose ＂old standbys＂ wow me every time， but they haven-apos-apost any pleasure in their labors. Care and duty are NOT why I want to explore food. I love the whole culinary process， from seedling to grocery to refrigerator to oven to table. At each stage the elements grow more plex and my work far more deliberate. Peeling and coring an apple takes more intellection than planting a row of seeds. Yet I think I shine where order fades away： beyond rules and recipes， in that zone called It-apos-aposs Up To You. I decided to throw in a cup of yogurt instead of butter to my pound cake. No one told me that lentils， carrots， and a bay leaf would make a great salad. I just felt them together. And there was a unanimous vote -- me -- to add cumin and coriander to the 第 2 页 共 3 页 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/5ff29f55b62acfc789eb172ded630b1c59ee9bda.html