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Should young people always respect and obey those older than themselves in all circumstances? In my opinion, respect and obedience do not necessarily go hand in hand all the time.
In my context, people who are older than me should be my parents, older siblings, teachers, relatives and others, who started life earlier than I and have seen the coming and going ofgenerations and are therefore much more experienced. In view of their seniority in age andrich experiences, they do deserve our respect.
Responding our seniors is the basic expression of politeness, such as greeting them, helpingthem do anything within our capacity and seeking advice from them in making decisions in life. Such response from us is an expression of love, too. The seniors, being assured of oursincerity, will be most happy and contented.
However, whether you ng people should always obey the seniors remains controversial. Beforeresponding, I think it is helpful to ask: is the advice or desire given morally right? Is itencouraging me to act against my own will? Is it given based on prejudices? I am convincedthat young people should not simply obey without thinking, because blind obedience onlyconfirms how immature, impulsive and naive we are.
To conclude, it is necessary to respect the seniors, however, to obey them at all times isquestionable. As goes the saying "think before you act," I am sure that every mature youthwill discern what is right and what is wrong before r esponding wisely.
cet6六级作文结构分析:
·paragraph l — int roduction
* my answer to the question
·paragraph s 2 , 3 — my argue l
* respect — yes
·paragraph 4 — my argue 2
* obey — questionable
·paragraph 5 — conclusion
* echo paragraph 1
obedience
cet6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一篇典型的议论文, 题目是一个社会热门话题。文中作者的论点是“ 尊敬长者理所应当”而“ 总要服从则另当别论”。全文的说服力很强, 行文流畅, 是一篇很好的范文。
cet6六级作文万能句型:
obedience n. 服从,驯服
go hand in hand 联合,并进
in my context 就我而言
coming and going of generations 几代人的变化
in view of their seniority 鉴于他们年长
deserve v. 应得, 应受
sincerity n. 衷心, 真心诚意
act against my own will 违背自己的意愿行动
prejudice n. 偏见
I am convinced that... 我相信……
confirm v. 证实
immature a. 不成熟
impulsive a. 冲动
naive a. 天真
discern v. 识别, 辨别
There is no doubt that some people are selfish and greedy. For example, some merchants selltheir fake commodities at the market place for more profit. They are rich and want to be richer. There are also government officials who sell people's trust. Senior officials who take bribes byselling the power in their hands are not a few. Those people believe in the precept "everyonefor himself and the devil take the hindmost."
However, the majority of people are neither selfish nor greedy. They contribute much and askfor little. Countless examples can be found around us, the PLA soldiers who sacrificedthemselves for saving people's lives in fighting the disastrous floods and the warriors in whitewho risked their lives to save SARS victims being two of the most typical. In contr ast to theselfish and corrupt official they are heroes, who set up glorious images for us.
The idea that nowadays people are selfish and greedy is probably attributed to the influence ofthe mass media which tend to over exaggerate the negative aspects of life. Manynewspapers, particularly many local evening papers, and TV films play up nastiness by reportingand showing too much about violence and sex. A lot of books, too, portray selfishness andgreed to seek sensational effect and economic profit. I wonder whether they are selfish andgreedy, too?
cet6六级作文结构分析:
·some people are selfish and greedy , e.g .
·the majority of people are neither selfish nor greedy, e.g .
·the idea is probably att ributed to the influence of the mass media.
cet6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一篇典型的议论文, 文中就一个问题的两个方面进行议论, 最后是作者的分析和推断。每段中的第一句皆为主题句, 后面均为supporting sentences。
cet6六级作文万能句型:
selfish and greedy 自私和贪婪
fake commodities 假冒伪劣商品
senior officials 高级官员
take bribes 受贿
not a few 不在少数
"everyone for himself and the devil take the hindmost."“人不为己,天诛地灭。”
contribute much and ask for little 付出的多要求的少
PLA soldiers 人民解放军战士
disastrous a. 灾难性的
warriors in white 白衣战士
SARS victims 非典患者
in contrast to 与……相对照
set up glorious images 树立光辉形象
be attributed to 归因于
overexaggerate v. 过于夸大
negative aspects of life 生活中的阴暗面
play up nastiness 渲染低级趣味的东西
portray v. 描绘
seek sensational effect 谋求轰动效应
One of the much-talked-about present-day social problems is juvenile delinquency, and its rateof frequency is seemingly on the rise.
It is reported in newspapers that the delinquents range in age from 12 to 18. Only a smallportion have committed serious crimes like kidnapping and murdering. Those cases arehandled through the court system. Most of the delinquencies fall into four categories: brawling, including gang fighting with deadly weapons; theft, mostly petty, sexually promiscuousbehaviour and addiction to drugs. The delinquents are generally placed under temporarysupervision by neighbourhood committees, work units or reform schools.
The causes of juvenile delinquency are varied. Through media we often come across thefollowing cases:
Ill-treatment to teenagers by their step-fathers or stepmothers often lead to family tragedies. School pupil delinquents, being not properly cared for, have chronic behaviour problems. Theirparents are too busy either with business or with gambling. Still, there are cases resulted fromparents' or grandparents' indulgence to their darlings. Petty theft once or twice is notpunished but encouraged. Gradually these petty thieves grow addicted to stealing . Adolescentstried drugs mostly out of curiosity before they finally became habitual drug-takers.
Not a few examples can be found around us in our daily life. Limited by time and space, I haveto skip them over. However, juvenile delinquency, being a serious social problem concerningthe young generation, certainly deserves special attention. I think of all the things we can do, the most fundamental one is deepening and strengthening education so as to ultimately savethe young.
CET6六级作文结构分析:
·青少年犯罪——— 社会热门话题
·现状
* 犯罪种类
* 处理
·犯罪原因分析
·加强教育, 拯救青少年
CET6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一篇带有议论的说明文。文章前半部分叙述了青少年犯罪的现状,后半部分是议论, 主要分析了悲剧发生的原因,最后作者提请全社会都来关心这一问题。文中作者引用了社会调查的资料以及电视报道,因此素材真实而典型。
CET6六级作文万能句型:
its rate of frequency is seemingly on the rise (犯罪)频率似乎在上升
It is reported that 据报道
range from... to... 范围从……到……
a small portion = a small number
commit crimes 犯罪
kidnap v. 绑架
handled through the court system 由法院来处理
fall into four cat egories 归结为四种
br awling n . 斗殴
gang fighting with deadly weapons 持凶器打群架, 械斗
theft, petty theft 偷窃,小偷小摸
sexually promiscuous behaviour 乱搞两 性关系
addiction to drugs 吸毒
temporary supervision 临时监管
neighbourhood committee 居民委员会
the causes are varied 原因是多种多样的
ill-treatment n. 虐 待
step-father (-mother) 继父/母
tragedy n. 悲剧
chronic behaviour problems 长期表现不良
gambling n. 赌博
result from 起因于
indulgence to their darlings 溺爱子女
adolscent 青年
out of curiosity 出于好奇
habitual a. 成习惯的, 习惯性的
not a few = many
unltima tely ad. 最终
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