Last week, our school had a talent show. There were 8 kinds of activities, such as English speech contest, singing, dancing and playing instruments. A number of students took
part in this show.
In this show, I joined in the English speech contest. My topic is “Can middle school students make friends online.” At first, I was a little bit nervous. With my classmates’
encouragement, I slowly calmed down. Luckily, I won the third prize, I was very happy.
In a word, this show not only makes us happy, but also enriches our school life. We all like it.
点评:透过这位同学的文字,我们不难发现这真是一场精彩的才艺表演:有英语演讲、歌唱比赛、舞蹈比赛等等。通过这个平台,小作者和同学们展示了自己的才艺。文章文字流畅,用词得当,是一篇不错的学生作品
幼儿英语短文:我们的才艺表演.doc