作文复习打印(2016国庆版)
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高考英语高分作文必备亮点句型及短语汇总 一:开头 句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。 〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. 〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. 〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. 〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying. 二:经过 1.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。 ①强调句 〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday. 〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday. 〔修正〕It was yesterday that I met him in the street. ②由with或without引导的短语。如:He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ③分词短语。如:Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment. ④倒装句。如: Only in this way can we achieve our goal. Never before have I seen such a wonderful film. Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person. ⑤省略句。如: If so,victory will be ours. You can make some changes wherever necessary. 2.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. 〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. 〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子, 要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句。 3.学会使用过渡词。如: ①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。 ②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(毕竟)等。 ③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。 ④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。 ⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。 相似的比较: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, 4.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如: 〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 5.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如: 〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 〔修正〕I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother. 三、 结尾 1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.) 2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that…… 3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么) 4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that …… 5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 一些用法: 1、 陈述个人的观点 It is alleged that(据说) In my view, both sides are partly right(两方面都部分的正确) As far as I am concerned(就我而言) As regards to me My own point of view is that…… Personally, I believe that…… My experience tells me that…… The invention of the handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit. The application of web sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit. It comes as no surprise that Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot. 2、 陈述别人的观点 Other individuals, however, take the attitude that…… (错误的观点)sb is under the false belief that…… 3、 图表作文 The table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……(表明、暗示、揭示) According to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……(根据表中的数据,我们可以看见,发现) As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed in the picture Sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降) Sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降) A brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent. 好的替代 the machine\the device 代替 computer handset代替 cell phone *The Middle Kingdom代替 China intensely\crucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits of collective be on our priority.) approaches代替 ways current(currently) 代替 now growing individuals代替 more and more people individuals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 good unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 bad an army of, an ocean of, a multitude of 代替 many, a lot of take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 代替 think affair, business, matter 代替 thing for my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion beneficial, rewarding 代替 helpful exceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 very pour attention into代替 pay attention to bear in mind that代替remember enjoy, possess代替 have to name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance Dear Peter, How are you going? I write this letter with the intention of turning to you for help in writing some passages. I’m a founder of our school’s English paper. My part is “Foreign Culture.” No sooner had I received this task than I remembered you. I hope you give me a hand sincerely. This part is meant to enrich students’ knowledge and broaden our horizons. It plays a major role in whole paper. The content should let students get the hang of American festivals custom and the life of American scholars. It takes patience and care to observe and write. The passage’ vocabularies should approach 400 words in total. Despite the fact that it is really a hard work, I’m convinced that you can finish it in time. The passage should be sent to me before June 28th. At last, I’m appreciative of what you do. No words are strong enough to express my thanks. I want to receive you letter as soon as possible. 满分作文常用10个句式一、改变时态 二、改变语态 三、使用不定式 四、使用过去分词 五、使用 v-ing 六、使用名词性从句 七、使用定语从句 八、使用状语从句 九、使用虚拟语气 十、使用倒装句型 1. There goes the bell. 2. It is suggested that the conference be put off. 3. He is so kind as to help me. 4. Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. 4. Once seen, it can never be forgotten. 5. On arriving /his arrival ,please give me an e-mail. 5. I will come tomorrow, weather permitting. 6. The fact that he didn’ t turn up disappointed everybody. 6. It happened that I had met him. 6. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 7. The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 8. No matter what he says, I won‘t believe. 8. You can go out on condition that you come back before six o'clock. 8. Supposing that she doesn’t agree, what shall we do ? 9. But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board. 10. Weak as I am, I'll make the effort. 本文来源:https://www.wddqw.com/doc/148d63245022aaea988f0f30.html