• 审: 认真审题 • 抓:抓关键词 • 扩:扩展为句 • 连:用连词连接 • 改:默读并修改 • 抄:认真抄写 北京是中国的首都,每年有很多外国人会来这里。请根据以下要点向外国人简单介绍北京。(80词左右) 北京是中国的首都。北京人民非常友好。她是一个非常美丽的大城市,古色古香,有许多名胜古迹(the Great Wall,the Summer Palace , Tian’anmen Square……)北京的食物非常美味,特别是北京烤鸭世界闻名。 审:style(文体):说明文 Tense(时态):The Simple Present Tense(一般现在时) Person(人称):第三人称 抓:Key information(要点) Capital, people, big and old city, places of interest, food, Beijing duck 扩:Key sentences (关键句) Beijing is the capital of China. People in Beijing are very friendly It is a big and old city. It has many places of interest. The food in Beijing is very delicious. Beijing Duck is very famous. 连:常用连词和过渡句 表顺序first,second ,third ,and ,then ,next ,last 表转折though ,yet ,at the same time,but , even though ,however , on the other hand, instead (相反)等。 表因果Therefore, because of , so, so that ,thanks to in this way 等。 表递近what ’s more (另外),besides,also, not only...but also.. 表举例for example, for instance , such as . and … so on 表解释in other words (换句话说) 表总结in a word (总之) 改:英语作文十大常见错误 1. 审题不清 2.拼写错误 3.名词单复数问题: 4.缺少动词 5.缺少介词、冠词等 6.代词的误用 7.句子不通顺 8.前后不一致 9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误 10.综合性错误 抄:书写要规范, 注意标点符号和大小写 Beijing is the capital of China.The people in Beijing are very friendly.And it’s a big and old city.It’s very beautiful .It has many places of interest in Beijing.Such as the Great wall, the summer palace and Tian’anmen Square and so on .The food in Beijing is very delicious.And Beijing Duck is very famous in the world. 1.你如何支配自己的业余时间?看电视、做运动、听音乐、阅读、郊游、帮父母做家务,还是……?请以My Free Time 为题,写一下自己的业余生活。80词左右。 2.上周五几名美国客人到我校参观,我们在学校操场举行了欢迎会(Welcome meeting)。我们还领客人参观了图书馆。我和其中一位客人用英语交换了学习语言的方法。他夸我口语不错。下午4点钟,他们离开学校回到宾馆。请用80词左右将此事记叙下来。 3.现在大家都忙于学习有关互联网的知识,上网很容易,每天有很多人在使用互联网来处理日常事务,越来越多的学生利用互联网发邮件或网上聊天……请根据以上信息谈谈你对网络的看法。词数80左右。 本文来源:https://www.wddqw.com/doc/1bb21447e2bd960590c677cd.html