07年大作文--改完

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07大作文

As is depicted in the cartoon, while a soccer man is preparing to shoot, regarding the gate guarder as a giant so that he cannot make score. Meanwhile, the guarder keeping gate also has similar idea that he is too small to keep from shooting. The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the only thing we fear is fear itself.

Some people are afraid of hardships as if they are scary monsters. Under these circumstances, those who have no confidence in their own abilities and judgment would always be failure. However, in our everyday life, there will often be occasions when we are faced with difficulty and have to depend on our own knowledge and skills to solve it. Faith could be said to the watchword, or motto of success. Think about all the innumerable times a scientific experiment must be carry out, before a research is discovered. (Think about how many times people try to carry out the scientific experiment in order to succeed to discover a research.)Hardships can strengthen people's durable and make one's face the life bravely. But for the


difficulty in her life, Helen Keller wouldn't have written the famous article Three Days to See.

To sum up, in any field of endeavor, it seems vital to put great emphasis on confidence, before one can finally become successful. It is as if life is testing our confidence and brave to see if we are really dedicated to our goal, before life finally rewards us with success.



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