高二英语5.13的续写新
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一、品读这篇文章，构思写作思路。〔可以动手写个草稿，比照一下所给范文〕 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 高二英语读后续写〔5.13〕 I was touched through experiences, memories, books, stories, animals, angels, and most of all other people. People have moved me and molded〔对……影响重大〕me with moments of love and examples of kindness. One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill〔工厂〕worker, I found myself with very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would like them. I hated not having enough to give them more. I hated being poor. And I hated feeling bad at Christmas rather than happy. I pulled into a store parking lot and counted my money again. It wasn’t much but maybe I could get something small with it. As I was getting out of the car I noticed the Salvation Army〔救世军〕bell ringer at the entrance. I felt bad again because I didn’t feel I could spare anything to give him. I started walking towards the entrance when two cars pulled into empty parking spots in front of me. The first was a shiny, new Cadillac and I felt a twinge of jealousy when I saw it. “How nice,〞 I thought, “Would it be to have enough money to buy a car like that.〞 The second car, though, was an ancient sedan〔轿车〕more beat-up and rusty than the one I was driving. A man hopped〔冲〕out of the Cadillac and hurried into the store right past the bell ringer without a second glance. Out of the old sedan came a young mother with three small children in tow〔紧随着〕. Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she stopped in front of the bell ringer, smiled, opened her purse, and dropped a bill in his red kettle〔钱罐〕. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: I stood there for a minute in astonishment. ________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred〔憎恨〕left me, and all the love and joy that are Christmas filled me. _________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本解读： 本文为夹叙夹议文。作者是一位收入很低的母亲，当圣诞节来临时，她很为孩子们的礼物犯愁。在商店外面时，她看到两辆比照鲜明的轿车，一辆是凯迪拉克豪车(Cadillac)，另一辆是破旧的轿车。可是让她惊讶的是，豪车车主对救世军撞钟人的募捐活动熟视无睹，倒是那位旧车车主慷慨解囊。 续写提示： 由续写第一段出现的关键词in astonishment可知，续写此段时需注意作者的内心变化，下文应试着向令作者感到惊讶的方面写。在作者的描述中，从羡慕豪车的主人到最后看到他. 和开旧车的女士对待爱心捐助的不同行为之后，作者对他们的不同举动的思考，以及在她内心中对这两位人物所给予的评价，都可以算是作者的内心的起伏变化。 由续写第二段段首语可知，此段仍要继续围绕作者自己内心的感受来写，但比第一段更具体化了。分析上下文以及所出现的关键词all the love and joy可推断，续写此段应往圣诞节的精神——给予和奉献这个角度贴近。那么，作者势必要向那位开旧车的女士学习，为穷人献爱心，因此所续写的内容要表达出作者自己是如何献爱心的，然后再承接前文讲的为孩子买礼物犯愁的事 【范文展示】 One possible version: Paragraph 1: I stood there for a minute in astonishment. “Maybe,〞 I thought to myself, “it’s better to be rich on the inside instead of the outside.〞 That rich man should have done something to help the poor, but he didn’t. Sometimes it was really wrong to judge a person by his or her appearance. I really had respect for the poor mother from the bottom of my heart. She set a good example for her children to follow. Paragraph 2: In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred〔憎恨〕left me, and all the love and joy that are Christmas filled me. I fished a bill out of my own purse, dropped it in the Salvation Army kettle, and wished the bell ringer a merry Christmas. I found a few fun things to give my kids and drove home with my heart singing. I knew it was going to be a wonderful Christmas. I could hardly wait to see my children enjoying the presents bought for them, including a special gift—love for those in need. 二、今天的写作任务〔建议用时25分钟〕 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Mei Mei frowned as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved here from San Francisco having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days. "Moving here was a stupid idea. I have lost all my friends in San Francisco. What should I do now?" MeiMei grumbled, mostly to herself. " What's that? "Her mother asked, opening a box and lifting out several pots (陶罐)and a work. "Nothing," MeiMei mumbled. The girl had been complaining about the move, but her parents had made the decision and were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints. The first few days at her new school hadn't been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didn't know, and it seemed like the students hadn't even noticed her. Mei Mei sighed and got back to washing dishes. On the day of the grand opening, Mei Mei's parents were all smiles. welcoming customers into the restaurant, brightly decorated in gold and red. Even Mei Mei was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water. This was a big day for her family. . At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Mei’s age. As she filled their glasses, Mei Mei realized the twins were in her class. Mei Mei ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face, and she turned away from the table. Mei Mei’s mother found her soon after, in the kitchen loading the dishwasher. "Honey, what are you doing back here? We need you out front with the customers.〞 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: “Mom, I don't want to be out there!〞______________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left the kitchen. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ . 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/8112d9bbfc4733687e21af45b307e87100f6f850.html