初二满分作文

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2013 2014-2015学年度第二学期期中英语考试满分作文

作文题目:

Your pen pal Fred is from Britain. He is going to visit your hometownJinan next month. Write a letter describing your hometown and giving him some advice.

要求:1.包含以下信息。 2.不少于80词。 3.可以适当补充其他内容。 (1)What’s the population of Jinan? How big is it?(Is it a big or fairly big city?) (2)What will be the weather like in Jinan next month?

(3Before he starts a trip to Jinan, what advice do you have for him (E.g. cloth, camera, credit card or cash, etc.) 4)What places of interest(名胜)should he visit?

(5)What special food shouldn’t he miss or what special activities should he do here?

满分作文:

Dear Fred,

I am glad to hear that you are going to visit my hometown next month. Now Id like to introduce something about it to you.

Jinan is a fairly big city and it has a population of more than 6,000,000. Though the weather in Jinan changes from place to place, Jinan is famous for her beautiful weather. It is neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. That is why more and more people like to travel and live here. The weather in Jinan will be hot next month. Because the summer is coming, you do not need to pack too many clothes.

I think you had better take your camera, because the views of Jinan are really beautiful. But you do not have to take lots of cash because you can use your credit card to buy things whatever you want in shops and supermarkets in or around the city.

Jinan also has a lot of good sceneries therefore you should not miss them. You should definitely visit the Baotu Spring. Jinan is famous for the springs, so it is also called Spring City. People in Jinan are very friendly. They often invite their friends home to try delicious food, like Youxuan. This is the local specialty of Jinan. So you will taste it in my home. I am looking forward to meeting you in Jinan next month.

Best wishes, Eddy. Comments: The conjunctions used freely between the sentences make the essay in good logical order. The structure is clear and well-organized. Also, it’s good to use adverbial clauses in your writing, which rich the whole passage. (指导教师: 王雪)


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