高考英语续写精华篇章001(142分也在用)

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202208 Z20 读后续写 我的第一次现场直播



一、独立主格结构 n./pron.+doing/done/to do/adj./adv./prepositional phrase

1Mixed feelings of anxiety and inspiration surging through my whole body, my heart raced violently and I didn’t dare to look at Mr.Slaight.

2Heart pounding and palms sweating, I started my performance cautiously.

3Tears blurring my eyes, I clenched my fists, determined to keep pursuing my dream.

4Time ticking away, everything went naturally and smoothly, making me more confident and relieved. 5I stood on the platform, eyes wandering across the whole room.

6An upsurge of nervousness sweeping over me, I was glued to the spot and failed to utter something. 7Dad’s encouraging words echoing in my mind, I was firmly convinced that I could make it.

二、形容词/介词短语作状语 (adj. / prepositional phrase) 1Exceedingly (非常)delighted and anxious, I was exactly aware that it was a precious opportunity for me to pursue my dream.

2I stood there, silent and motionless.

3Totally at a loss, my throat abruptly tightened and my knees felt weak.

三、现在分词做状语

1After what seemed to be centuries, I managed to finish the my performance, breathing a sigh of relief.

2Overwhelmed by merriness, I called my parents, telling them the good news and dedicated(专心) myself to preparing for the approaching public appearance.

3When the play ended with my bow of thanks, the room exploded with thunderous applause, indicating(表明) that I had really passed the audition(试听).

四、倒装 (否定副词置句首;So+adj.+ be +S+that-clause ;

Only + 状语从句/ 副词短语 于句首 ; n./adj.+as /though+主谓 1Never before in my life had I been so overcome by anxiety.

2So thrilled was I that I was desperate to tell the good news to my parents instantly.

3So fluent and professional was my show that Mr. Slaight couldn’t help standing up and applauding for me. 4Only then was I fully aware that perseverance and determination meant so much to every dream follower. 5Tough as it was, I kept practicing whenever I was available.

6Only with determination and perseverance(坚持不懈) , can we fulfill our dream.

五、无灵主语

1The instant the news came, all my tiredness and fatigue gave way to no-edge exhilaration and pride.无止境的兴奋与骄傲

2Deep frowns gradually climbed on my face. With shining lights hitting my face, I was driven back to the reality.

3The next 15 minutes witnessed our amazing performance, everyone immersed in the show and I totally forgetting my nervousness.

4Words failed to convey my exhilaration(兴奋) and rapture(狂喜) when I ultimately presented myself in front of all the audience.

5The unforgettable experience witnessed my growth and I was aware that through painstaking efforts and persistence(坚持不懈) there will be promising prospects in store for me.




六、虚拟语气 (Without/But for..., 主语+would/couldn/should’t have done)

① If +主语+ had done,主语 + would/could/might/should+ have + 过去分词 升级句式(省略if, 部分倒装)

②Had +主语 +done,主语 + would/could/might/should + have + 过去分词 1Without dad’s support and encouragement, I couldn’t have pursued my dream. 2Had it not been for my sticking to my dream, I wouldn't have made it. 3Had it not been for dad’s support, I wouldn’t have made such a fabulous performance and realized my dream.

theme

1. 我明白了只有毅力和努力才能通向成功。

It dawned on me that only perseverance and efforts could lead to success. 2. 那时我才意识到,我们永远不能低估坚持和努力的力量。

Only then was I aware that we should never underestimate the power of perseverance and efforts. 3. 最重要的是,我明白了,有志者事竟成。

Above all, I learnt that nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 4. 正是你的毅力和努力才起了作用!”

“It is your perseverance and effort that make a big difference!”

5. 这次宝贵经历无疑对我产生了终生的影响,成为我人生中最重要的事件。

This precious experience undoubtedly had a life-long impact on me, which became the most important event in my life.

Para.1 When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short



performance. With boldness, I finished my performance relatively smoothly though palms were sweating. Never in my wildest dream did I imagine that I was indeed assigned the intern job to act on a school life show and my first public appearance on TV was in five days. After sharing the thrilling news with my dad, I received the warmest congratulations and expectations from my family. Picturing my families eagerly waiting for my performance, I worked day and night as busy as a bee for fear that I would make a fool of myself live on TV.

Para.2 Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching. Wearing fancy dress and delicate make up, I was proud but nervous at the thought that my show would be watched by so many audience. My mind suddenly went blank as I was immersed in my thoughts and totally forgot my lines. Deep frowns gradually climbed on my partners’ face, with whose sudden vigorous pull, I was driven back to the reality. I soon came up with a little trick to make up for the embarrassing blank. As the show went on, so concentrated was I that I hardly dared to even blink my eyes. After my debut, I rang my dad with frustration and disappointment, only to reap his trust and encouragement again. It was literally dad’s love that supported me along my way to be an outstanding actor.




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