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优秀作文赏析（Composition） M4试卷作文: (Author：He Zihong) Daming is heavy because he likes eating. Daming eats many kinds of food/ much food, such as chicken, fast/junk food and cola. And he doesn’t like doing exercise. He thinks it is tired to run or jump. At school, his classmates often laugh at him. So he isn’t active,and he becomes very shy. His grade becomes/ is getting worse and worse. As a doctor, I think, Daming needs to lose weight. Firstly, stop eating the fast food everyday. And he should do more exercise.The more exercise he do,the more healthier he will be. Secondly, he needs to talk with his classmates and tries to make friends with them. Finally, Daming should listen to teachers carefully at class, and write down some mistakes in the notebook. He should often have conversations on study with classmates. l hope you will be better. I’m looking forward to your good news. M9试卷作文: My good friend (Author：Huang Yanhuan) In our school, my best friend is Li Quan. He is a 15 boy with short and black hair in No 3 Middle school. He is so friendly and helpful. Every morning, when teachers pass him, he always says “Hello!” and smile at them. Other students like him a lot, because he is kind to help them. I always get bad marks in maths, it makes me sad day by day. He takes care of me and tells me how to learn maths well. At last, he tells me not worry about it，it will be get better one day. (举了2例子说明friendly和helpful) We have the same hobbies, such as playing basketball and computer games and we all think they can make us relaxed. Each time when l ask him what is his dream, he often says"My dream is traveling into space because I want to see something special outside the earth!” He is so wonderful, I am glad to make friends with him. （详略得当，总分总 结构清晰明了） 书本 Zhangjiajie There are many beautiful sights in China.And Zhangjiajie is one of them. Zhangjiajie is about four hundred and eighty square kilometers.And it is about four hundred kilometers from Changsha.You can see many things there.There are many mountains,forests and many kinds of plants and animals.And strange shape of tall rocks and lakes are the most special sight there. The rocks in Zhangjiajie are very wonderful.Some of them look like humans while others look like wild animals.There are some famous lakes in Zhangjiajie,such as Baofeng lake and Dongting Lake.It is the second-largest freshwater lake in China.And the sights there is very beautiful. Zhangjiajie is so famous.Not only China,but also all around the world.Do not wait,,make a list and book the plane tickets.Come here and enjoy the sights. You can sleep in the hotels or camps by the river.That depends on your personal choice.Have a great time! Introduce Zhangjiajie Zhangjiajie is a wonderful place in hunan provice. It's a magic lang of mountains, forests and eighty square kilomrtres. It's about 400 kilomrtres from changsha. How can you go there? You can go there by coach or if you prefer you can drive there. You can see mountains, rivers, forests and many kings of plants and animals. zhangjiajie is famous for its stange shape of its tall rocks some look like humans while others look like wild animals. If you climb up in cloudy day, you will see the mountains tops above the clouds at the top of moutain. these are many beautiful place to visit, such as Baofeng hu, Huang long hole, the old yard and so on. You can sleep in hotels. If you like camping, you can camp by the small lake as well. That's your ptrsonal choice. zhangjiajie is a magic land. M6试卷作文 My faming’s hobbies There are three people in my famihy，my parents and me.We have different hobbies. My father is a civil servants，and he works in the tourist administration. He hkes playing basketball best，because he likes sports.He hres playing bosketball best，and he can play it well as basketball，my father also likes playing fotball，and as a result，he can keep a excellent healthy body. My mother is a beautiful woman.She is the boss of a clothes shop.She has mary fun hobbies，such as reading，climbing，shopping and so on.She likes likes going happing with me or her friends. My hobby is reading,the same as my mother.l read many books,such as Tom Sawyer.Hamlet,Romeo and lulies And ling leg uncle is my favourite book.l like hstening to music,too.You Are my Sunshine is my favourite aong.lt sound good! Those are my family's hobbies.By the way,bobbies can make people feel happy,also can bring success and healthy.body to people.And what's your hobby? Study in Maoming (Author：Dai Linwen) It is interesting to learn Chinese in Maoming. Here, you will enjoy the most comfortable and the happiest learning. The trip will last for six weeks. There are two classes a day, each class lasts for 1.5 hours. After class, you can go trips to see the views of Maoming, or go shopping in the supermarket. Oh! I forget to say that you can choose where you live between the hotel and countryside. I think many people will choose the hotel, but the most natural and the best choice is countryside. Because there, you can taste the traditional food of Maoming. Although they may be very strange, they are very delicious. Do not think it is boring to stay in Maoming. To your surprise, there are many things to do here, such as going to the beaches, visiting the museum, going fishing. Look, this is my preparation plan of the camp for you, I think you will have tons of fun! By the way, if somebody pays attention to this camp, please call at 14895618986. 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/ff5631335af5f61fb7360b4c2e3f5727a4e924e0.html