2016年5月11日是什么日_2016年11月5日托福独立写作预测及思路解析

1. In order to help high school students learn the sense of responsibility, it is necessary for them to do household work after school. 　　波波点睛： 　　题目大意：为了帮助中学生获得责任感，有必要要求他们在放学后做家务。此题内部暗含因果关系，考生千万不要忽略此逻辑关系，否则会出现偏题。波波思路如下： 　　选择同意: 即认为做家务可以培养责任感(对自己负责、对家庭负责) 　　1) 做家务--> 会学会生活技能à能够独立生活，照顾好自己-->对自己负责 　　2) 做家务-->分担家庭负担 --> 体会到父母的辛苦-->学会关心家人-->增强家庭的归属感à对家庭负责 　　选择不同意: 即认为做家务不能够培养责任感 　　做家务会占用孩子宝贵的学习时间à孩子不能及时完成作业à养成一种对自己不负责任的习惯 　　Firstly, requiring high school students to do house chores can squeeze their time spent on studying. As we know, the main duty and obligation for high schoolers is to have a good command of knowledge imparted by teachers. In order to successfully fulfill the obligation, students have to devote large amounts of time and energy to their study. In other words, it is an irresponsible behavior that students fail to finish assignments and tasks in the process of learning whatever excuse they have. However, the fact is that the trivial housework such as sweeping the floors and doing laundry will occupy a large proportion of time on the part of students, thus further tightening their already busy schedule. In this case, those students doing house chores are unlikely to assume the responsibility of finishing their schoolwork in time due to the limited time left. 　　2. 中学生年纪尚小会把家务看作负担而不是责任，所以强求孩子做家务会引起孩子的反感甚至反抗 　　Besides, high schoolers are too young to understand the good intention of requiring them to do housework. As we all know, given the immature psychology and limited life experience on the part of people in their puberty, the concept of responsibility is far beyond their ability of understanding. Meanwhile, the defining character of those young people is the degree to which they are have an inclination to say “no” to any instruction which they are forced to follow. In this case, the request of making household chores mandatory for high school students may make them go against their parents. As a result, students will not gain a sense of obligation from the above request but have a terrible bond with their family members. What’s worse, some rebellious high schoolers may even harbor hatred towards their family. 　　2. Governments have done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating. 　　波波点睛：此题目含义为“政府是否在向人们倡导健康生活方式和均衡饮食方面做得足够好了”。稍加思考就会发现，这个题目暗含着两个方面即：健康的生活方式和均衡的饮食。波波老师建议，观点选择不同意，理由就从以上这两个方面分别展开，具体如下： 　　理由一：政府在教育人们健康生活方式上面做得工作远远不够，尤其是在宣传工作和公共设施上。一方面政府在宣传上力度不够，以致于现代人们有各种各样的不利于健康的生活习惯，比如说熬夜，吸烟，酗酒甚至吸毒。另一方面公共体育设施严重缺乏，导致人们无处健身。比如说我们小区周围只有一个操场，体育设施也非常的有限，每次去锻炼的时候，人都很多，而且有的设备已经老化甚至根本无法正常使用。(Governments need to do more work on educating people the importance of healthy lifestyle, especially on publicity and the construction of public sports facilities. For one thing, due to lack of programs about healthy lifestyle, many people in the modern society pick up various bad habits, such as staying up late, smoking, drinking excessively and even taking drugs. For another, owing to the desperate shortage of public sports facilities, people can do exercises nowhere. For example, in my community, there is only a small play court with less sports equipment, which is full of people. Even worse, some equipment is out of use due to lack of regular maintenance. ) 　　理由二：政府在饮食健康教育上做得也不好，尤其是在食品安全卫生的监管和规律饮食习惯的宣传上。首先，食品安全在我国一直以来都是热议话题。但是由于政府监管不力，有很多商家在食品上以次充好。比如说三鹿。另外，政府没有很好地强调均衡饮食的重要性，所以很多人会有非常不健康的饮食习惯。比如说，人们由于快节奏的生活大都会吃一些垃圾食品，以致于他们会患上高血压，肥胖得疾病。同时，有些人甚至不吃早饭，这些习惯多对身体危害极大。 (In addition, the education of balanced eating habits requires more efforts from government, especially in the inspection of food hygiene and safety as well as publicity of regular eating habits. On one hand, food safety has always been one of the hottest topic in our country. Due to the limited inspection of government, many business owners use many illegal food addictives or chemicals in their products. On the other hand, many people formed bad eating habits without gaining sufficient guides from government. For example, many white-collars choose to eat junk foods due to the rapid pace of life. Other young people even do not have breakfast, all that do great harm to their health. ) 　　3. Technology designed to make people’s lives simpler in fact make people’s lives more complicated. 　　波波点睛： 　　题目大意： 原先想要让生活变得简单的科技实际上让生活变得复杂了。此题无论同意与否，分论点都很难想到原因，所以建议使用拆分，拆分题目中的technology 或life。 具体思路如下：主观点选择不同意，分论点分别证明科技让通讯和交通变得方便了。 　　科技的进步让人们之间的交流变得更加方便。通讯手段的多样化让人们随时随地都可以进行交流。比如手机VS 信件 　　Firstly, the advances in technology make the communication between people more convenient. There is no doubt that modern high technique has not only diversified the means of communication but also improved the efficiency of transferring information. In other words, thanks to the high-end electronic devices, people can talk with anyone regardless of the long distance between each other. For example, it has become a common phenomenon that nearly every individual, whether young or old, owns a cell phone, a portable electronic product. With the aid of Apps such as wechat, Skype and Facetime installed in the phone, it is possible to videochat with friends living abroad. We can hear their voice as well as see their facial expression and body language. However, in the past, writing letters, as the main way of conveying information, was much more time-consuming and unreliable. 　　2.科技的发展让交通变得更高效。随着交通技术的进步，更加先进安全的交通方式随之出现，这大大缩减了人们花在路上的时间。比如汽车、高铁、飞机 　　The development of technology has made traffic more efficient. With the progress in technology of transport, the advent of more advanced means of transportation is the inevitable result, which greatly shortens the time spent in commuting or travelling. To be specific, the popularization of automobiles makes it possible for drivers to reach the destination on time. The high-speed rail in China carry millions of people across the nation every day in a shorter time. The well-developed aviation industry enables people arrive in any place on earth in 20 hours. All the above in the past was totally impossible.

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