[托福写作高分范文]2016年托福写作范文思路解析：政府环境

　　政府环境类题目：
　　Government should pay more attention to economic development than to environmental protection.
　　题目大意为：政府应该更加关注经济发展而非环境保护。
　　此题目有明显的两个比较对象，所以可以用波波老师的课堂上讲过的让步—转折—递进的结构来写。具体思路为：
　　让步：
　　Admittedly, economic development can provide people with job vacancies and thus meet their basic need of life. For example, reforms and opening up policy.
　　转折：
　　However, protecting environment is very important for government to improve public health, since a clean environment plays a key role in helping people maintain good health.
　　展开环境的不同方面对人们健康的影响：水，空气污染
　　递进：
　　Actually, it depends on the development stage of a country whether economic development is more important than environmental protection.
　　类似题目：
　　1.Government should pay more attention on health care issues than on environmental issues.
　　2.The most important things for governments to improve public health are to clean the environment.
　　必备短语：
　　1. maintain good health= stay in shape 保持健康
　　Importance should be attached to environmental issues by the government, since a clean environment plays a key role in helping people maintain good health.
　　2. car exhaust emission 汽车尾气排放
　　However, with the increasing number of private car and proliferation of chemical factories, car exhaust emission and waste gas from industries will produce atmospheric pollution and lead to the poor air condition.
　　3. wreak havoc on 对..产生巨大伤害
　　All of these are the causes of environmental deterioration, which will in turn wreak havoc on the health of people.
　　4. the surge of the unemployment rate 失业率激增
　　The surge of the unemployment rate accompanied by the economic recession will incur the social disorder and even chaos.

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