小学四年级下册作文辅导 一、写作实践： 1、提出问题： 要求学生以“快乐的一天”为题写短文，可用以下问题提示： （1）今天你在做什么？ （2）和谁一起度过的？ （3）家人在哪里？ 2、给出提示： （1）根据提示词语，确定短文的结构。 （2）先写一下主题句，再按照时间顺序或事件顺序，在每个主题句后写一段详细内容。 （3）适当加入表达情感的词语，把短文写得活泼生动。 二、参考范文： 今天我度过的是快乐的一天。早上起来，妈妈给我准备了可口的早餐，和宝宝一起吃早饭，觉得特别开心。上午去学校上课，感到充实，下午回到家里，把室外的乐趣带回来，和妈妈一起下厨房，做了一顿美味的午餐，和家人一起吃饭，心情溢满，感觉爸爸妈妈大家一起在一起，好像洋溢着温馨的满溢。晚上，我和宝宝一起去散步，看着夜色璀璨，慢慢地走在大街上，心情很开心，又期待着第二天继续快乐的一天。 Today I had a happy day. In the morning, my mother prepared a delicious breakfast for me, which made me very happy when I was having breakfast with my baby. In the morning I went to school and felt fulfilled. In the afternoon, I brought the outdoor fun back home and cooked a delicious lunch with my mother in the kitchen. Eating with my family, my heart was full and felt like it was full of warmth. In the evening, my baby and I went for a walk and looked at the beautiful night. We walked slowly on the street and my heart was very happy, and I was looking forward to another happy day the next day. 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/091f0255eb7101f69e3143323968011ca300f7fc.html