My Family And My Flat 我的家和我的公寓 (最新版) 编制人:__________________ 审核人:__________________ 审批人:__________________ 编制学校:__________________ 编制时间:____年____月____日 序言 作文(composition)是经过人的思想考虑和语言组织,通过文字来表达一个主题意义的记叙方法。作文分为小学作文,中学作文,大学作文(论文)。作文体裁包括:记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文。 作文并不神秘,要想写好一篇文章,首先要多看,多想,勤于观察,积累素材。只有细致的观察生活,积累素材才是写好作文的基础。首先要明确你要写的主题,认真的审题,列出大纲,不要只注意题目中要求的字有多少,要多注意题目的本身,要多读多想,准确的用好词语和修饰语。这是审题的关键,要确立好主题的依据,要精心的选材,布局列题,有的材料,还要分析整理。这就要对材料进行分类,比较,概括,筛选。 我们不要象盖房子那样的把所有的材料都堆砌起来,要合理恰当的组合,具体的说开头和结尾要略写,那么经过就要仔细的推敲,修辞,润色,写好以后不要急于交稿,反复检查认真的修改。 古人说:书读百遍,其义自见。熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟。这些都说明一个道理,只要你多看书,多读书对你的写作文有一定的好处。只要你明白这样的一个道理,作文就是要你把生活中喜,怒,哀,乐用文字经过加工,修饰。整理,也就是我们说的作文。 第 1 页 共 3 页 作文内容 I live in a flat in a building. The building is very modern. There are about ten floors and I live on the top floor. I think my flat is very wonderful. The dining room is next to the kitchen. We always have dinner there, and my mother often cooks some delicious food for us. I can t cook, but I often help Mum wash the dishes. Sometimes my friends come to my flat and they teach me how to cook. So now, I can cook something for my family. I like the sofa in my sitting room. It is very comfortable and it is purple. What a nice colour! The bathroom with a bath and a shower has a mirror. It is in the shape of star. There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My parents work hard. They are very tired and I think they should have a good sleep. So the bedroom is the best place. My younger brother is only six years old. I love him even though he troubles me some times. In my bedroom, there are lots of posters of Angela on the wall. Angela is my favourite super star. She is beautiful. There is a garden in the district. You can go walking there. I also want to tell you about my dream home. It is near a sea. 第 2 页 共 3 页 It s made of wood. Maybe that will come true. 我住在一个公寓大楼。建筑是非常现代的。大约有十层,我住在顶层。我认为我的公寓是非常美妙的。餐厅在厨房旁边。我们总是在那里吃晚饭,我妈妈经常为我们烹饪一些美味的食物。我可以不做饭,但是我经常帮助妈妈洗碗。有时我的朋友来到我的公寓,他们教我如何烹饪。所以现在,我可以做饭给我的家人吃。我喜欢在我的客厅沙发上。它非常舒适,它是紫色的。多么漂亮的颜色!浴室洗澡和淋浴有一面镜子。它是星星的形状。有四个成员在我的家庭里。他们是我爸爸,我妈妈,我哥哥和我。我的父母努力工作。他们非常疲惫,我认为他们应该有一个良好的睡眠。所以卧室是最好的地方。我弟弟只有六岁。我爱他,即使他麻烦我一些时间。在我的卧室里,有很多的安琪拉在墙上的海报。安琪拉是我最喜欢的超级明星。她是美丽的。有一个花园。你可以在那里散步。我也想告诉你关于我的梦想中的家。它是靠近大海。是用木头做的。也许这将成真。 第 3 页 共 3 页 本文来源:https://www.wddqw.com/doc/1d71090a340cba1aa8114431b90d6c85ec3a88b1.html