话题 19 如何用英语描写世界与环境
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话题 19 如何用英语描写世界与环境 The world and the environment 必走三步 假如你叫李华,你和笔友 Jane 互寄了全家的合影。Jane 看了合影后来信问为什么你没有兄弟姐妹。请用英语写一封 100 字左右的信说叫情况。内容包括以下几点: 1.中国人口增长过快; 原因 2.20 世纪 80 年代开始执行计划生育政策: 3.大部分中国家庭只有一个孩子 1.能受到好的教育; 2.父母关爱更多; 看法 3.孤独,自私,生活能力差; 4.建议多交朋友 注意:1.可适当增加细节使行文连贯; 2.开头已给出,不记字数; 3.参与词汇:计划生育 family program,独生子女 the only child Dear Jane, Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family.Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family. _____________________________________________________________________ 第一步:认真审题,提炼要点 一审格式:木文是书信体裁。 三审结构:按书信格式分为开头、正文和结尾;正文应包括目前存在的现象、原因和看法。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点。 1.grow very fast 2.control the rapid increase of population/control the birth rate 3.one child for each couple 4.get/receive/better education,get more love from the family 5.selfish/lonely/not independent/depend more on their parents 6.should make more friends 第二步:紧扣主题,扩点成句 1.The population of China is growing very fast. 2.The government has begun to control the rapid increase of population. 3.A couple has only one child. 4.The child can get more love and more chances to get better education. 5.The only child is sometimes selfish,not so independent and feels lonely. 6.I hope every child should learn to make more friends. 第三步:补充修改,连句成篇 Dear Jane, Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family.Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family. As you know,the population of China is growing very fast.In order to control the rapid increase of population,in the 1980s the government began to put into practice a family program — one child for each couple.As a result,most families have only one child. Most people are in favor of the program because the child can get more love from the family and more chances to get better education.While others are against it,for the only child is selfish,and not so independent.Sometimes they feel lonely.I think,every only child like me should learn to make more friends. Hope that we write more often.Best wishes. Yours. Li Hua 满分作文——满分说明文五 人口的增长一直是世界关注的问题,请根据以下提示,以“A Sharp Increase in World Population”为题写一篇 120 词左右的短文。内容应包括以下要点: 1.世界人口的第一个十亿是从有生命之初直到 1830 年。该过程历时两百万年。 2.世界人口迅速增长,1930 年达到 20 亿,而 1960 年则达到 30 亿,间隔只有30 年,此后的人口增速更加疯狂,1975 即达到 40 亿,间隔只有 15 年。 3.原因:随着医药领域的科技发展,人口出生率一直在攀升;有些国家,尤其是发展中国家,很少采取计划生育政策;随着生活水平的提高,死亡率则呈下降趋势。 4.措施:我们应该把人口增长控制在一定范围内,否则,地球将无法承受爆炸的人口。 范文: A Sharp Increase in World Population According to the figures given,progress in science and the improvement of living conditions have led to the rapid growth of the world population.It took at least two million years from the beginning of human life to the year 1830 for the population of the earth to reach one billion.After that,the world population increased rapidly,adding up to two billion in 1930,while in 1960 the next billion Was formed,only within 30 years.From then on the global population was on a crazy rise,amounting to 4 billion in 1975,with only 15 years afterwards. Two reasons might be considered to account for these great changes in the world population.To begin with,with the development of science and technology in the field of medicine,the birth rate is continuously climbing.To make things worse,some countries,especially developing countries,seldom take any birth control policy.On the other hand,the death rate is steadily declining because of improved living standards. In the future,we must take effective measures to control world population growth.Otherwise,the world would not be able to put up with the exploding population. 点评: 本文利用三段式结构阐明了一个事实——世界人口在以惊人的速度增长,并且指出了增长的原因,还阐述了控制人口的必要性,使我们能够清楚地看到这个问题的严重性。文章恰当地运用了过渡词,使结构一目了然。 必做练习 悉尼是澳大利亚重要的商业、贸易和旅游中心。请你根据下列表格的提示写一篇有关悉尼的短文。(字数:100 左右) 本文来源:https://www.wddqw.com/doc/96b7dadb9d3143323968011ca300a6c30c22f1a5.html