English writing ----A Letter of acknowledgement 咸阳市乾县一中 胡亚群 Teaching Aims 1. To learn how to write Thank-you letters. 2. To master the skills of practical writing. 3. To have the awareness of giving thanks in the future life. Teaching Important Point Help the students to write a passage of giving thanks. Teaching Difficult Point How to enable the students to write the passage well by instruction? Teaching Procedure Step1 Revision and leading in Introduction and discussion 感谢信开头段常用句式和套话 I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for... I am writing to express my thanks for... I am writing to show my sincere appreciation for... I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for... I feel deeply indebted to you and I really don't know how to thank you enough for your help. 感谢信结尾段常用句式和套话 I must thank you again for your generous help. I am most grateful for your selfless donation. My true gratitude is beyond the word's description. I feel most obliged to thank you once more. Please accept my gratitude, now and always. Step2 Pre-writing 【题目要求】 假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括： 1 1. 感谢Kelly的帮助，你在交流活动中的收获很大； 2. 难忘在Kelly家的美好日子； 3. 感谢她送你的英文词典。 注意: 1. 适当增加细节使行文连贯。 2. 全文100词左右。 第一步：细审题、三确定 1.确定体裁：本文为 文。 2.确定人称: 本文的主要人称应为第 人称为主，第 人称为辅。 3.确定时态：本文主要时态应以 时态为主， 时态为辅。 第二步：拟要点，列提纲 开头：写信的目的 主体：美好回忆、交流收获、表示感谢 结尾：表示欢迎 第三步：依提纲、准翻译 开头：写信目的 要点一：感谢你在我待在英国期间对我的巨大的帮助。 During my stay in England. 主体：美好回忆，交流收获、表示感谢 要点二：上周，我参加了文化交流周，在你们国家，我玩得很开心。 Last week, I the Cultural Exchange Week .I in your country. 要点三：因为我参观了城市博物馆和一些名胜，所以我对英国的社会、文化和历史有了更好的了解。 the English society, culture and history because we visited the city museum and some places of interest. 要点四：能住在你家我很幸运。 I was so lucky that I 要点五：在这里我尤其要感谢你作为礼物送给我的词典 Here I especially thank you for 要点六：学好英语对我很有帮助 To learn English well 结尾：表示欢迎 要点七：有空欢迎你来中国！ when you are free. 第四步：句升级，求靓丽 句式升级一：用定语从句改写要点三的句子 句式升级二：用enough改写要点四的句子 句式升级三：用it作形式主语改写要点六的句子 句式升级四：用convenient改写要点七的句子 2 Stept 3 Writing 写作模板Dear ﹍﹍,How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to thank you for your ﹍﹍﹍﹍./ Thanks for your ﹍﹍﹍﹍. During ﹍﹍﹍, you ﹍﹍﹍. First, you ﹍﹍﹍.What’s more, you ﹍﹍﹍. Another thing that I can’t forget is that you ﹍﹍﹍./ There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is ﹍﹍﹍. Thank you/ Thanks a lot for your kindness again.Best wishes./ Give my best regard to ﹍﹍﹍. Yours sincerely﹍﹍﹍ 第五步：巧连接，顺成文 Dear Kelly, I have been back home (safe) from England. I am writing to thank you for (you) great help my stay in England. Last week, I (participate) in the Cultural Exchange Week and I enjoyed myself In your country. We visited the city museum and some (place) of interest , made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends. What’s more, I was (luck) enough to stay at your home. And I will never forget the days we spent together. Here I (especial) thank you for the dictionary you offered me a gift. It’s a great help for me (learn) English well. I will treasure and make full use of it. I (sincere) invite you to come to china if it is convenient for you! I am looking forward to seeing you again. Best wishes Yours Li Hua 3 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/9ad6223d856fb84ae45c3b3567ec102de2bddf9f.html