五年级上册第一课英语作文 T'm a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o 'clock every day.I have breakfast at halfpast six, and go to school at seven o 'clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have anEnglish class on Friday and l have a PE class on Tuesday. 1 don’t have to go to school on school,and T like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It 's long and thin. It looks like a smallboat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange.It 's round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange.I like then a lot. I likeice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What's your favourite food? 【要领点评】My Favourite Food是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。 l can help do housework l am a girl. My name is Li L.ing. I'm in Class Three, Grade Five. I'm helpfil at home. I canwater the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor.After meals, I can help my mother do thedishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you?Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】木篇作文的题目是“我可以帮帅做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍白己的名字、所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细．到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，囚为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特剃深刻。写作时还要注意人小写和时态。 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/9ccdc75f24284b73f242336c1eb91a37f0113256.html