雅思和新概念哪个对高考英语有帮助-新概念助力高考英语:短文改错自测

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
　　增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
　　删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
　　修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
　　注意:
　　1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
　　I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
　　Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
　　No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

　　1.第二句:删掉had。此处指过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。
　　2.第二句:noise→noisy。此处作表语,应该是形容词。
　　3.第三句:comes→came。此处是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。
　　4.第四句:but→and。此处是顺承关系。
　　5.第五句:在searching后加for。搜寻某个东西应该用search for。
　　6.第五句:his→its/the。此处指票的主人。
　　7.第六句:a→the。此处特指丢了的票。
　　8.第七句:previous→previously。此处应该用副词形式。
　　9.第八句:strangers→stranger。此处指的是票的主人,只有一个人,所以用单数。
　　10.第九句:on→in。此处是固定词组in need。

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