浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达续写（32）含答案解析 【题文】 阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was late spring When my mom and I were driving through the countryside. Back then I was 13 years old and always felt unhappy with Mom. However, little did I know that this trip was going to be a special one. A pot of flowers satin he back seat, whose pleasant smell filled the car . Suddenly, in the middle of nowhere, my mom pulled over. “What are you doing? “I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and we’d be stuck there, so far from home. Fortunately, that wasn’t the case. My mom hopped out of the car, grabbing the flowers from the back seat. “It’ll just be a minute, ”she called back through the open windows. Impatiently, I cast my eyes towards the edge of the road before they settled on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home. I looked back to the building, somewhat annoyed, as my mom reappeared empty-handed. Before she started the car, curiosity drove me to ask, “Do you know someone there?” She shook her head. “Then what did you do with the flowers?” She smiled slightly, “I gave them to the receptionist. ”“What？”She laughed at （前台接待员）my confusion. “I told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them, especially those who haven’t received any in a while. ” I kept silent for a moment. Not long after we went on with our driving, I spoke again, “Did you leave your name? “To this she answered instantly, “No. Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good, which is enough of a thank for me. ” Suddenly, still thinking about Mom’s deeds, I heard something burst loudly. It was our car that broke down! Nothing could be worse, because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it, and we didn’t know where the garage was. It also seemed impossible to wait for any passerby, since we had seen so few along the way. 注意：1. 所续写的短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I let out a sigh while my Mum rooted herself against the car worrying about what could be done. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1： I let out a sigh while my Mum rooted herself against the car worrying about what could be done. But after waiting in vain for a considerable time, Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek help. God knows how far we had driven! When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage. There, the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us, talking about how great that day was. It amazed us what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received them. While we were laughing and talking merrily, we received the news that the garage had got our car repaired. Paragraph 2: As we dove alone, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I asked Mum to pull up and paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of kindness, I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the pleasant scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. This was the trip of my life. 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写。 【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，讲述了作者和母亲去买花的路上，母亲将花送去了养老院，告诉接待员把花送给任何需要的人，尤其是那些有一段时间没有收到花的人。结果他们的车抛锚了，妈妈和作者都不知道怎么修理它，也不知道车库在哪里。似乎也不可能等待任何路人，因为我们在路上见过的人很少。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我叹了口气，而我的妈妈则紧紧地靠在汽车上，担心着该怎么办。所以后文应该是讲述母亲和作者决定回养老院求助，以及到达养老院后所发生的事情。 第二段开头是：当我们开车前进时，路上出现了一家花店。本段应该写他们在花店所发生的事情，作者决定给妈妈送甜蜜的花。并感悟到这是我生命中的一次特别的旅行。 续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。 【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：in vain，considerable time，come into sight等高级词汇；时间状语从句When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage.；定语从句I asked Mum to pull up and paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye.等高级句式。 【标题】浙江省宁波市九校2018-2019学年高一下学期联考英语试题 【结束】 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/51bd8c97814d2b160b4e767f5acfa1c7ab00820c.html