高考英语百日训练之应用文写作（64）含答案详解 【题文】 假定你是李华，为庆祝中华人民共和国成立70周年，你校学生会决定在国庆节前夕举办“我爱祖国”全校师生合唱比赛。请写封邮件邀请外教Mary观看。内容包括： 1. 合唱比赛时间、地点, 合唱比赛chorus competition； 2. 比赛安排。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Mary, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you the news that a Chorus Competition will be held in our school. I’m more than glad to invite you to attend it. In order to celebrate the upcoming 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China, the Students’ Union has decided to hold a chorus competition, whose theme is “Love our Motherland”. As scheduled, the contest will take place on the afternoon of September 29th in the school hall, which will last 3 hours from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm. Besides, students and teachers of each class will be required to wear school uniforms and sing varieties of wonderful songs together to show our deep love for the motherland. Then the class who sings best will be awarded with a big prize by the headmaster. It can be of great fun and meaningful, which will leave a deep impression on you. I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 ,【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教Mary观看学校举行的师生合唱比赛。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1. 合唱比赛时间、地点； 2. 比赛安排。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） Chorus Competition；invite sb to do; the 70th anniversary of; People’s Republic of China; the Students’ Union; “Love our Motherland”; take place; be required to do; school uniform ;be awarded with; be of great fun 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m writing to tell you the news that a Chorus Competition will be held in our school. 2. I’m more than glad to invite you to attend it. 3. In order to celebrate the upcoming 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China, the Students’ Union has decided to hold a chorus competition, whose theme is “Love our Motherland”. 4. As scheduled, the contest will take place on the afternoon of September 29th in the school hall, which will last 3 hours from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm. 5 Students and teachers of each class will be required to wear school uniforms and sing varieties of wonderful songs together to show our deep love for the motherland. 6. The class who sings best will be awarded with a big prize by the headmaster. 7. It can be of great fun and meaningful, which will leave a deep impression on you. 8. I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。此外，文章的亮点就是各种句型的使用：I’m writing to tell you the news that a Chorus Competition will be held in our school.使用了that引起的同位语从句； the Students’ Union has decided to hold a chorus competition, whose theme is “Love our Motherland”包含了whose引导的非限定性定语从句；Then the class who sings best will be awarded with a big prize by the headmaster.和 It can be of great fun and meaningful, which will leave a deep impression on you.都使用了定语从句。 【标题】江西省临川市第二中学2020届高三上学期10月月考英语试题 【结束】 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/9e73e173e718964bcf84b9d528ea81c758f52e81.html