英语四级的写作技巧_2017英语四级写作技巧：少用关系代词

　Where possible, reduce the use of "which," "who" "that" "whom" "whether... or not" etc.
　　少用关系代词
　　学会运用关系代词是你学习英文过程中的一个重要的阶段。学会少用它们则表明你取得了更大的进步。在校对你的作品时，仔细检查一下所有的which’s, who’s that’s和whom’s是否必要。删除不必要的关系代词会使你的文章更精彩。
　　Example:
　　Unnecessary: It is a truth that is universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
　　(用两个 that’s，读起来很别扭)
　　Better: It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
　　-- Jane Austin
　　注：被动语态修饰的名词通常不须用关系代词。

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