#193:年轻人是上大学，还是去技校学习 Too much emphasis has been put on going to university for academic study. We should encourage more people to receive vocational training because of the needs for tradespeople like plumbers and electricians. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 开头段替换词 Too much emphasis has been put on： too much attention has been paid Going to university: attend university, go to college For academic study: for an academic qualification, for learning theories We should encourage more people to receive vocational training: promote vocational education, promote vocational qualifications Because of: due to, in view of The needs for tradespeople: the demand for technicians 开头段范例 It is sometimes argued that society has placed a high value on pursuing a university degree, while there is a huge demand for people who have vocational skills. I agree with the view that young people should be encouraged to receive training to gain skills leading to employment. (7+) 结尾段范例 In conclusion, I agree that vocational education should be promoted nationwide to provide young people with one new career path, instead of focusing solely on a university degree. 点击开始作答观点 主体段一 A参加职业培训 B学习有用的技能 C 找到工作 解释（B-C）：这些技能在一些行业很紧俏 解释（C的好处）：生活很好 对比：如果去读大学，学费很贵，而且出来未必找得到工作 拓展思路:范文: 主体段二 A参加职业培训 B 解决失业问题 C 对经济有帮助 解释（A-B）：白领工作的竞争加剧 解释（B-C）：政府不需要给那么多钱给失业津贴，某些行业不会因为缺乏人手而不断提升价格，导致伤害经济 拓展思路:范文: 主体段三 A 参加职业培训 B 很多有才华的年轻人不去上大学 C 国家缺乏创新和发展 解释（A-B）：年轻人更加重视马上获得工作，而不是去思考自己是否有潜力做学术研究 解释（B-C）：没有熟悉各个行业的高材生，国家没有科研项目，没有人去解决各行业的疑难问题 拓展思路:范文: 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/fb6f12cf504de518964bcf84b9d528ea81c72fb3.html