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love is the noblest of all the emotions of mankind . it is like a lamp tha t s hines in darknes s and gives people cour age , hope and life .
the pictur e reminds me of o .henry’s famous s hor t story the last leaf , which described a young ar t girl with serious pneumonia, who , while watching the ivy vine was st ripped of its leaves by the cold autumn wind , felt so pessimistic and dist ressed tha t she thought with the fall of the last leaf her life would come to an end .
surprisingly enough , the next morning , she found the last ivy leaf was still there , which again lit her hope of life . the story went on that the last leaf was , in fact , painted by an old ar tist who died of an acute at tack of pneumonia the moment he finished his maste rpiece . this story reveals that love can illuminate a person’s lifelong journey . countles s daily happenings around us may serve as good examples to fur ther expound the topic of the picture .
over seas chinese cont ribute la rge s ums of money to“ project hope”to help children in rural a reas go back to school .
middle school students regula rly help grandpar ents and disabled people with their housework .
college students donate blood pe riodically to hos pitals . somebody with a fatal head injury and with no hope of recovery donated his kidney to a little girl .
war riors in white have saved thousands of sars victims by sacrificing themselves .
the structur e of the chinese char acte r ren“ 人” repr esents people’s mutual love and mutual support . so , peoples hould love and be loved , and i think if everyone gives out a lit tlelove , our world will become a beautiful ea r thly paradise
cet6六级作文结构分析:
· thematic paragraph
* love — noblest emotion
* love — cour age , hope and life
·examples for illust ration
* o .henry’s the last lea f
*“ project hope”
* middle school students
* college students
* somebody’s cont ribution
* war riors in whit e
·concluding pa ragr aph
* people’s mutual love and support
* let the world be filled with love
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cet6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一道图画作文, 曾经是一道考研英语作文题。这里,作者借题撰文, 注入了新意, 内容深刻, 思路独特, 可供学习者 借鉴。第一段的两句就破题, 且统领全文。第二段以三句长句勾画出o·henry 名著《最后一片叶子》的梗概和主题, 然后用一句承上启下, 又引出五个具体的例子说明爱心的种种表现。结尾段的两句“‘人’字的结构本来就是相互支撑”、“如果人人都献出一点爱, 整个世界将成为美丽的人间天堂”, 更是精彩。学习本文时可注意作者的构思以及长句的写法。
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cet6六级作文万能句型:
the noblest of all emotion s of mankind 人类所有感情中最崇高的
the last lea f 美国作家o . henry 的短篇小说名
a r t girl 学艺术的女生
pneumonia n . 肺炎
ivy vine 常春藤
be st ripped of its leaves by the cold autumn wind 寒冷的秋风剥去了它的叶子
with the fall of the last leaf he r life would come to an end随着最后一片叶子的掉落, 她的生命将到尽头
s urprisingly enough 特别令人吃惊的是
lit her hope of life 燃起了她生的希望
died of an acute attack of pneumonia 死于肺炎的急性发作
the moment conj . = as soon as 或immediately after
masterpiece n . 杰作
illumina te v . 照亮
expound v . 说明
ove rseas chinese 华侨
rural ar eas 农村
regula rly ad . 经常
disabled people 残疾人
donate blood periodically 定期献血
somebody with a fatal head injury 有人头部受了致命伤
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