优秀作文赏析（二 ） 假如钟医生是你们学校的健康顾问。最近很多同学给他发邮件叙述了自己的健康问题。针对这些问题，他给出了一些建议。请你根据表格内容，以"Advice on Health"为题写一篇英语短文。词数70左右。 学生 Linda Bob Tony 问题 经常犯困 经常牙疼 冬天经常感冒 Advice on Health 【分析】【高分句型一】： Linda thinks she often feels sleepy these days.琳达认为这些天她经常感到困倦。think后面跟一个宾语从句。 【高分句型二】： Doctor Zhong advises him to have healthy food and do more sports.钟医生建议他吃健康的食物，多做运动。advise sb to do sth表示建议某人做某事。 【解答】 Advice on Health Many students these days often have a lot of worries.They tell doctor Zhong about their questions.Doctor Zhong gives them his advise. （点题） Linda thinks she often feels sleepy these days.【高分句型一】Doctor Zhong advises her not to stay up late and have a good rest.Bob says he often has a toothache these days.Doctor Zhong advises him to brush his teeth after meals and eat less dessert.Tony says he often has a cold in winter.Doctor Zhong advises him to have healthy food and do more sports.【高分句型二】（同学们的问题及钟医生的建议）I think the advice is very useful.（观点） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务． 建议 不要熬夜，好好休息 饭后刷牙，少吃甜食 吃健康食物，多做运动 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/89ebebd407a1b0717fd5360cba1aa81144318f63.html