[2018年考研英语一真题及答案解析]2018年考研英语长难句分析每日一句（761）

Once you have a first draft you, can deletematerial that is unrelated to your thesis and addmaterial necessary to illustrate your points andmake your paper convincing.
　　【分析】复合句。主句主干为you can delete materialand add material and make your paper convincing。 句首的once引导条件状语从句;that引导的定语从句修饰其前的 material;形容词短语 necessary to illustrate yourpoints做后置定语修饰第二个material。
　　【译文】一旦初稿写成，你就可以删除与文章主题无关的材料，添加需要的材料来证明你的观点并使文章具有说服力。

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